Ahaha, this was so incredibly funny. And as a huge fan of anything involving all three of the dysfunctional demonic dimwits, D/T/V, I really have to commend you on writing it just the way I always envisioned it. I mean, seriously, identical half-demon twins and their mother's demon clone under one roof? Their whole lives are crack.
I keep rereading it and laughing anew - this so wins.