i know i havent been reviewing every chapter, but i have been following along, and this is an amazing story.
you have so many different conflicts plus the intensity of pete's bloodlust.
update soon !
Author's response
Heya!! I'm really glad you're enjoying it and thanks for the compliment!
Yeah, I tend to have more than 1 theme running in my stories (I write MCR stuff as Sassy) mostly because I like everyone to have 'something to do' rather than just being 'also there'. Sometimes that's difficult as there aren't enough plot points to go around, but I do my best.
I have a strange feeling this could easily turn into a series - I wonder how people would feel about that?
This is my first FOB fic, I don't know what people like or don't like yet.
Thanks for the review
Sas x