Haven't played the original vii just yet but I have played Crisis Core, and I do remember this one scene, after Zack had just fallen out of the sky and into the church, moved to step on Aerith's flowers, accidentally?
Whatever it is you're playing on, I liked the concept, and the overall sweetness feel this fic had. (Axel's weapons are called chackrams, in case you were wondering.) Marluxia is a fairly ignored character regarding fandom, it's nice to see someone write about him for once. :D
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Thank you ^^ The flower theme is fun ^^