You know, in Australia they lock up sick pricks like you in prison. I understand it is fanfiction and all, but from what I've seen just from reading the first part of chapter 1 your fiction is just a written version a child-pornography. Disgusting prick. Take a bullet please.
Author's response
It's a good thing I don't live in Australia as I tend to enjoy my freedom of speech and am able to recognize the difference between fiction and reality.
As much as I value your highly enlightened opinion about the content of my story (having read nearly 6% of it), I think I will continue to write.
Please feel free not to read it.
NOI