Review for The Reprise of an Untitled Story

The Reprise of an Untitled Story

(#) shysmile 2009-08-08

"Because it wasn’t his baby, and he wanted it to be." Can I get a collective "Awww"? That is so sad and adorable and sniffle so cute.

I don't think you need to bold any particular words because then it lets the reader emphasize the important words themselves.

I want to go read the next chapter so I'll review more there!