This was a nice story, no matter what Idiot says. The sex at the end did interrupt the flow of the story a little (I think it may have been a little better had you written more chapters with that scene much later) but overall the story was a good one. I would have liked more chapters, esp Ron's reaction, not to mention everyone else's. Moving to saying, "I love you!" could also have taken a little longer as a result of that.
Anyhoo, I really did enjoy your story. Pity I can't give a rating point to the main story. I hope that you do actually add more, though, but I like what you've got here already. Thanks for the story!