Awwuh, poor Pete! But.. I don't think you'd make Trick evil- Wait, you totally would! You'd make him evil, or at least he'd SEEM like it, trick somebody(like William) into thinking he wants to work for them, and then steal Andrea..
Nah, LoL, but that'd be pretty cool!
Luff ya!
Revenge
Author's response
It's a great idea! One small problem though - but without giving away some of the plot, I can't tell you what it is! Sorry!!
Going back to yours later - it's a long one, and I hate reading chapters in sections or reading fast - I'm a slow reader, I like to picture everything. So I'll make sure I have the time to read it properly.
Thanks for reviewing!! Really glad you're still enjoying it (and that you weren't put off by the fact it still says it's chapters 12 & 13 - the story updated, before I had time to change the heading! Next time, I'll do that first!)
Sas x