Review for Searching for the Power

Searching for the Power

(#) Quackpotty 2009-08-17

Yay! He's found out who closet-girl was! Yeehah! Does Daphne and Blaise's contract have to go through? Oh well. Great chapter, anyway. It was kinda fun to see Harry behaving like that. It's more reminiscent of the earlier chapters. He's become more moody since Gabby's death, but this chapter returns Harry to the giggly character he was when he thought he was going insane.
I did see that you were editing the earlier chapters, what with the story moving to the front of the update list. One of the things I've noticed in your earlier chapters (I'm rereading the story at the mo) is that you frequently had a sentence start, placed a full-stop, then completed the original thought in a new sentence where it should have been a simple comma. I suppose that you've noticed that and you're busy fixing what you do see. Thanks for the effort that it takes to do that, esp what with the fighting that you need to do on this site with the site admin. Thanks also for the effort that you've put into the story.