(#) Vanir 2009-08-17
To think I've seen this story so many times and for so long without bothering to read it! Well, I'm very glad i did now. The early chapters were a bit sketchy but the latter ones are brilliant. Your merger between the universes works surprisingly well, and i look forward to the next chapters. Oh, and keep thinking before you write. I can see you do, and as i tried the other way myself, i wouldn't recommend it.
Sterling work!
I'll be here for the rest.
Vanir
Author's response
I'm glad that you like it and decided to give it a shot. I am thinking quite heavily about the chapter I am writing at the moment and how the following chapters are going to pan out. I'll say this much the upcoming chapter is the longest yet, so far its at 14 pages and climbing. Its an experiment for me and hopefully it turns out well. I will attempt to finish it this weekend and get it off to my beta's computer, but no firm promises.