Once again, another good chapter. Once again, Pansy gets stuck on the back burner.if you want to draw it out, put it closer to the forefront.
Daphne. What's wrong with having a little, what was the term? Skin between friends? a mutual understanding can be reached, I think. Just PLEASE for the love of all things good, don't involve Blaise in their relaxation sessions.
Susan. I don't like the eerie vibes I'm getting here. She gets together with him, then she leaves reluctantly. The Dork Lord is still on the loose and guess who a prime target is?
A very good chapter here. Keep it up. Do you really have to end it?