This is a wonderful story, I don't often read Harry/Fleur fics, but this one is very well written. It may just be me, or you may be doing this on purpose, but you tend to jump around, one chapter the plot is going fairly quickly, then another there's very little to move the plot along at all. Now some of the chapters I see how your trying to devolp Harry's and Fleur's budding romance, but others I'm not sure if it's just because you couldn't come up with anything or if you meant to leave it to give the story more details.