Hi there Sas,
That was sad all the way around. I love how Pete turned Patrick because it wasn't the usual bite to the neck. I forgot that Patrick would be drinking his own blood so that was sad and poignant.
Poor Joe not being able to off and save Andrea, but I'm glad he stayed because in the end Andy really needed him.
It made sense that after turning Patrick, Pete would be hungry again. Like I said not a huge vampire story fan (only because right now it so cliche) but I really love this one.
Great job Sas and looking forward to reading more.
Author's response
Yeah, it's been a funny old chapter. Poor Joe, all he wants to do is save the woman that he's grown to care for (and she for him) but she's under William's control now and he's very strong.
Again though, poor Joe - with Andy unconscious and 2 vampires to deal with, Joe's got his hands full.
What can he do? How will Patrick wake? How will Pete wake? For that matter, how will Andy wake? Sore, probably! ;)
More soon!
Thanks so much for the review! I will get back to the MCR fics, but I felt like I needed a complete change. I really started to feel like my writing was getting stale and maybe even predictable. I'm not fishing for compliments here - don't worry, but I do think that when I go back to them, I'll be a lot fresher.
Thanks again!!
Sas x