Hey, Dude,
Tell VOID_SORCERER to go and spend some time getting himself a life. I checked out his(?) so-called work, and some of it is rated in negative numbers by HIS REVIEWERS, so he has no grounds on which to criticise YOU.
Now it is true that this is full of sterotypes and cliches. But then Isaac Asimov's early work was no better. He lived to see 700+ books of his in Print, and that was before the Internet, too. Not to mention thousands of articles, reviews, short stories, etc that he wrote.
There is no such ting as a failure who kept on trying. So kept on trying. You may hate this story someday, but the only way you become an experienced author, is by writing.
SO, write on.