nice work with the chapter...
i do think the healer was able to diagnose a little too much... i would have liked it a bit more if he would have referred Harry's scar to a 'specialist', who then would diagnose the black soul of voldy... and find a way to remove it... look forward to see the friend from Egypt. (love interest for rose, in the future???)
looking forward for more... harry seems very realistic. congrats.
Author's response
The specialist is Sean's friend from Egypt.
A normal doctor is supposed to spot abnormalities and then if necessary refer to the specialist.
I know the diagnosis was quick but I wanted to deal with voldy's soul fragment quickly.
I'll ask you which do you prefer. 1 Sirius as suggested in reviews to the previous chapter or Sean's friend from Egypt or third, someone else entirely?
Regards,
Lancelot47