Review for A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

(#) Moonshyne 2009-08-27

Hi there Sas,

At least they have one vampire controlled (for now).

That totally made sense that Pete would feed off of Beckett, that's why he's stronger then the rest more like an elder vampire instead of a newly turned one.

I like the whole theory behind why Pete and hopefully Patrick don't fall for the the tricks such as mind control.

Speaking of, poor Andrea she is so clueless and thinking she's in love with Beckett. But hopefully she'll figure it all out.

I'm not as shocked as everyone else that Pete ended up there, the question definitely is why. For the greater good or to join his "master"?

Looking forward to more when you get a chance cause I'm dying to find out what happens next.

Author's response

Heya!

Andrea's strong and quite independent - she took no messing from Joe, although there may well have been an ulterior motive for wanting to stay with him ;)
Thing is, Beckett's mind control techniques are pretty powerful, but despite that she is questioning her situation. Whether or not she can break free of him remains to be seen.

There are some clues dotted about as to why Pete's returned to Beckett. More might turn up soon, but yes, the big question is, as you say, - is it a trick or has he really gone back to join his master?

Thanks for reviewing!! The next chapter's on the go!

Sas x