I do like this story. I checked (what I think is) your Yahoo group and I don't see the story. Could you link to it?
Thanks
Author's response
Hi there,
Hmm, I just checked myself, and it looks like I only posted some parts of chapter 2 in messages, and even then, not all of what I've written so far.
Anyway, I've just uploaded as much of the story I've written to date, and you'll find it in the files section of my Thoughts of Pudding Yahoo group.