(#) Mr7 2006-09-05
You're writing a great story, I'm hooked on it. It's a pity you chose to take the "good snape" approach, I hate that character, and find it really ridiculous that he would have made friends with Lily or sworn to protect Harry... Other than that blemish on your story, so far it's great, and I hope the future has a quick death for snape, since I don't want to see him playing a good role in Harry's life.
Still, keep up the excellent work, try to kill snape, and keep the updates coming!