Review for A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

A Little Less 16 Candles... continued...

(#) Moonshyne 2009-09-05

Hi there Sas,

I read this last night but was too tired to review properly.

It must be shocking to Joe and Andy how passe Patrick is about all this. But he knows it was for the greater good it was the only way he would survive and the only way he could still help Pete while Joe and Andy are still very distrustful. Powerful stuff by Patrick but I get what he's saying. Who the hell wants to live like that. Keep feeding him his "chicken" and hopefully that will be alright.

I'm glad Pete seems to be himself more so I think we know what side he's on. But what will happen when yet again he's forced to feed on Andrea. Yikes.

I love that he told on Spencer and was more than willing to drain him. I love the last line, I can see Pete smiling as he says it.

Great job as usual, I'll definitely try and be more on top of things!!

Author's response

I've actually got the next chapter half/mostly written, so should go up in the next day or two.

So glad you enjoyed it.

Yeah, I'm glad Spencer got his come-uppance as well (do you have that phrase over there?). He deserved it!

Oh, he's definitely smiling at that last line!

Thanks for reviewing! It really does mean a lot to me!

Sas x