Dude, I do that all the time with my stories. Map it all out then end up changing it. Anyway, great chapter. I know how Bob feels. My cousin is sick and he will eventually go blind. Well, that's what I heard. I feel helpless. I can't do anything to help, but give him the best before that happens.
XOXOX ANDREA. =}
Author's response
Yeah it happens to me all the time, it sucks. But eh...
I'm sorry about your cousin, he's in my prayers. Hope all gets well.
xoxo