Hi there,
Poor Kimberlee and Lisa they don't seem to be enjoying this project at all.
I loved how you wrote this the awkwardness of it all. You could feel the tension and Desirae's attempts to get Bob to say anything.
She does have one up on him, knowing Shanna gives her a little better insight as to what's going on in his life. While he has no idea of the torment she lives with day to day.
Looking forward to more.
Author's response
Hey there.
Yes, Kimberlee and Lisa need time to adapt to their project,but hopefully they'll learn to get along.
Bob is opening up, but being careful of what he says. He needs a little more time to become warmed up. Thankfully Shanna is there to break the ice some more (: The awkwardness will hopefully fade (:
Thank you for the review (: