Review for The Lost Music Inside

The Lost Music Inside

(#) MyFamousLastWords 2009-09-12

This chapter was sort of calm, and cool I guess and awkward! Nicely written.

Yeah, she knows more about him than he does her, he's totally oblivious to her whole life frankly.

Can't wait for more!

F oxox.

Author's response

Thanks. Awkwardness is pretty much all Desirae has to work with. In time it will fade, and more words will be spoken. I can't promise the couple chapters will be calm, but next one should be....

Yes, Bob has no idea the pain she faces when she goes home. He'll have to find out eventually, but not yet.

Thank you for the reivew.

xoxo