Hi there Sas,
That first part with Patrick looking in on Pete was simply amazing I could really feel the pain, anger, desperation and sadness he was feeling. I really wish I could write like that. Simply amazing.
I guess Alice was right in that it was going to be a bumpy ride. I love how the first thing Pete did was apologize.
Poor Patrick so confused and even though he was in so much pain I think he was happy to be back.
Looking forward to the next chapter!!
Author's response
You can't see me, but I'm shaking my head!
Don't you realise that I was thinking that I wished I could have written it better? Perhaps like you might have done? You're much better with the emotional stuff than I am. Don't get me wrong, I'm glad you thought it was so good, I really wasn't sure, myself.
Thanks! Will get on with next chapter now.
Sas x