Wow Sassy,
That was so cool, where do you get these ideas? I loved it, and I NEVER expected that big of a twist! So awesome loved this chapter!
And poor Pete, the sweetheart is being played with! And he thinks that his best friend is behind it all! augu I am in such suspence right now. You need to continue!!!!
Author's response
I have to be honest, I was just as surprised as everyone else when Patrick walked into Pete's makeshift cell. Originally, I thought it would be just those two guys but he just appeared!
Then I was left with the dilemma of why and on a sort of slow drip-feed it came to me bit by bit. It's really odd when that happens as it really feels like it's not me writing!! Lol!
Poor Pete indeed, but I suspect it's not just Pete who should be worried. Matthew is definitely thinking about 'friends' as in not just Pete and what about the deal he has with Ashlee's ex-stalker? He seems to think he'll get her and Bronx as payment for helping him. And meanwhile, poor Patrick's oblivious to all of this.
There'll be more soon, but I'm doing the next chapter of Candles first.
Thanks, as always, for the review!!
Sas x