Hi there Sas,
That was so heartwarming I loved the ending.
I thought it was cute the way the Patrick was trying to explain how he came to the realization of everything.
I loved the whole PPP thing. At least Patrick's trying.
Great story Sassy as usual it was interesting and different a spin on It's A Wonderful Life.
Looking forward to reading more of your writings.
Author's response
You know, I've never seen It's A Wonderful Life. Obviously, I know the basic story line, but I really must watch it. Maybe I'll see if it's on iTunes? Yeah, I was aware though that it was a spin on it, though I'm not sure how close it was - now I want to see the film more than ever!
The PPP thing is something I have after my band has done a recording. We work on songs for ages, get them recorded (we're going into the studio again in Octber) and then when it's all done and we love the result, all I can think of is - we have to start again, from scratch and it has to be better next time! So in this story, I guess I was Patrick, but with long black hair and, oh yeah, I'm a woman.
Thanks as ever for reviewing and I'm really pleased you enjoyed it!!
Sas x