Hi there Sassy,
I wrote a review last night and for some reason ficwad didn't post it.
I love the intensity of the chapter from start to fininsh.
Your whole description when Andy was going for the stake was amazing. I was unsure if it was the stake or keys. It was hard to believe that he didn't trust his friend (or was he right). I'm so glad Patrick had no intenetion on dying (I hope).
And Pete and Andrea trying to escape also had me on the edge of my seat. I thought it was sweet that he was reassuring her about Joe. Pete thought he had it all figured out and then bam the whole covenant is there.
I'm happy Joe was there to rescue her she felt awful about leaving Pete behind. Now she knows how Joe felt leaving her behind of course that's why he's back.
So Patrick is going to join the fight I'm still kind of unsure which side he'll fight on I hope it's with Pete.
As always a great chapter that had me on the edge of my seat.
Author's response
Heya Moonshyne!
It did actually post - you must have written it under review the whole story rather than the chapter as it turned up there instead. But, hey, I don't mind getting another!! :D
Yeah, the Andy/Patrick scenario will get a little more attention in later on - there will be some additional explanation. But, oh will Andy wake up with a headache and a half! Oh! I so want to tell you, but I can't!!!
Yeah, Pete was unlucky. His plan would probably have worked if Andrea hadn't spoken and Mike was able to raise the alarm. And Joe? Well, I imagine that at some point it's going to dawn on him that Pete was helping her, not killing her! But right now, he's just desperate to get her away.
And Patrick? Well, all I can say is that someone is in for a nasty surprise...
So glad you're still enjoying it!! i'll write more soon. In fact, i think I'll start now! :)
Thanks again!!
Sas x