finally i think they are begining to show their love for each other a little bit now,im really gla your making it more realistic not just getting them to fall inlove instantly.
as for that dark man he is scary! i dont like him alhough i am interested in what he showed willow,im curious about willows reaction to what ray said is their more to her past we dont know about,is she scared of gees rejection,is she just plain scared to be loved because she has never really had anyone close to her before?
again really good i loved it =]