(#) Vanir 2009-10-05
Odd chapter order, but you're not the first one to have that happen to your story on this site.
Lovely chapter though, no matter the number. There was just one thing...
I believe in seven impossible things before breakfast without breaking a sweat, but believing in a world where poodles are taken seriously is very, very difficult.
Well done. I laughed several pounds off my arse.
The ACME-approach to occlumency was brilliant. The ending cliffie, not so much. It felt a bit cheap and i know you can do better.
That said: Three pounds of polish marshmallows to you! Thanks.
Vanir