The story's pretty cool.Although I've to say the last part of your chapter was disappointing.You just made Tonks and Fleur look like total sluts.They are Harry's girlfriends but that bit exceeded the limit in ridiculousness.That catwalk part was unnecessary and Harry's entrance was over dramatic.But your Sirus scene was hilarious and Nariccisa's story is really heartbreaking.And that's the only reason I'd give this story a 4.5 star rating out of 5.