My god I love this story!
I am far from having a lolita complex, but the way you write and the wonderful Taboo on the subject is soooo thrilling!
That being said I like the idea of a veela harry (so long as he's straight goddarnnit) But I have to wonder, if he WERE to concentrate on a male would he be able to elicit a response? I mean is it just with those HE is attracted too or those who already have some sort of attraction TO HIM or is it the opposite sex only?
Author's response
It is either the opposite sex or those who are attracted to men, whichever way you want to look at it. In the scene with Draco and Pansy, I had intended to put in a bit about Harry being surprised that he could sense that tendril of magic that he's come to associate with the "pull" leading to Draco. It would have been the payoff for my earlier line about Draco being gay. In the end, I couldn't make it fit the way I wanted to, I was nearly done with a chapter that was already too long (in my opinion) and it just didn't seem to fit the scene the way I had written it, so I left it out.
So, I guess it's really up to the reader. If you want to imagine that it's only females he can attract, or that he can attract males too, go right ahead. He will not however, be attracting any males in this story.
I am certainly glad you like the story so far. It was, as a matter of fact, originally started to see if I could write sex scenes between a teen and a child in such a way that the average reader would accept it, and in that respect at least, I seem to have been successful.
Other chapters are coming, I have just hit a bit of writer's block and am very not happy with the current state of chapter 14. It will happen, however.
NOI