Review for Wake Me Up When The Nightmare Ends

Wake Me Up When The Nightmare Ends

(#) Moonshyne 2009-10-17

Hi there Sassy,

I love the little twist this story is taking regarding Patrick being blamed for Joe's attempted murder. Once Joe wakes up he'll be able to clear Patrick. However Matthew really needs to lay low with Patrick being in jail and what not. Though I'm sure he can cause enough trouble with the Wentz family.

Speaking of Matthew we actually got to see a nicer side of him regarding Bronx. I guess growing up that way makes you want to make sure no other kid is treated like that.

I sorta giggled about Connor not being able to handle his "son".

Great update and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's response

Matthew's seriously misguided about a lot of things, but he's not happy about Connor and his treatment of baby Bronx. If only he could extend his sympathies to adults too!

I doubt it'll be long to the next chapter - it's been playing in my head half the day demanding to be written, which when you think I was trying to write Candles at the time, wasn't easy!

Thanks for reviewing, as ever!

Sas x