Ouch about the usual ficwad stuffup. I read most of this story on my mobile phone, so I didn't notice the mess until I was thrust into a crazy chapter with no idea what was going on. Oh well, I got it sorted in the end. Thanks for the awesome story so far and I eagerly await more from this story. It's very well thought out, and you only have a few places where there are mistakes for the gender problem. One of those places (where it happened the most times I can remember) was on the train to Hogwarts where you mixed up Ron/Ronnie a couple times and used his/he rather than her/she. This is still very well done, and a massive planning undertaking, so I salute you.