Good cahppie, hope you update soon. Unfortunally I don't have any fan fiction stories on here but I do have some on fanfiction.net. If your interesting say sometihing. I love the way you did this it was very good.I hope you get spell chaeck soon, I'm not saying that your spelling is bad just some of it. Okay not any more on spelling! Is Tia a made up Charater?
Well good night,
Kewsithydemon