I normanly, don't read this stuff. But here I am! And I know it's only FF and all but I think that "ego vindicatum vos ut meus own" actually says "I want you when my own" or something. I think "ut" means "when". I don't know if you fo Latin or what, but I'm weird like that.
And the whole Satanism rituals, blood spilling and caves and focusing on negatives and whatnot, I liked that! Since Satanism is mostly about uniqueness, free will, good things! Respect etc. I'm just rambling! Ha. But no, I loved this. Really I did. And I'm not a fan of GerardxFrank pairing like that at all.
F oxox.
Author's response
Well your rambling made me smile xD And I have NO idea if the latin is right or not, so I'm guessing its wrong XD I dont take it, pfft - I wish I knew latin but i honestly dont - i forgot to mention in the authors note that its probably wrong xD
Anyway, thanks a lot for the review :]
xox