I really like your characters :) And because I'm so flippin' tired, I don't know what else to say.. other than does this whole "Rita and Fran" thing involve a whole different story? Because I rather like their little moment :)
Author's response
Thank you! This is a character development plot for a story I was working on about a year (or more?) ago and got thirty pages into it before I started my senior thesis project. Hence, all free time gone or used for sleep! But, I need to get back into writing, and I love these characters...so, I might just post some of what I have. Thanks for being the kick start I needed!