Review for Wake Me Up When The Nightmare Ends

Wake Me Up When The Nightmare Ends

(#) Moonshyne 2009-11-04

Hey Sas,

OMG Ashlee really didn't help matters did she?

At least Stokes isn't totally clueless and seeing something doesn't add up.

Hopefully they don't find the gun residue on him and they'll know he didn't do it. Won't the survelliance camera also show that Pete and Ashlee only knocked out Shawn and didn't kill him. Yikes I hope it all gets put together fast.

BTW I loved the line where Patrick said "Convenient would be someone seeing me" or something to that effect.

I'm so glad that they found Pete and somewhat safe.

One more chapter and I'm caught up!!

Author's response

Heya!

Ashlee's trying to help, but of course, she doesn't have all the facts.

Yes, Matthew has set up Patrick and Pete, but he's not thought everything through and there are serious gaps which is what Stokes is picking up on.

Thanks for reviewing, as ever!

Sas x