Review for Potter's Surprise

Potter's Surprise

(#) Theo 2009-11-19

I can understand not wanting to take it through all 7 years, but what you did was leave it off in the middle of your thoughts.

Maybe what you could do is have a chapter detailing about custody and the rest of the year, one detailing the 2nd and 3rd year, and one telling about the tournament and ending the story at the graveyard as Harry/Hermione have the information on how to beat Riddle.

But as it is how you left it, it it an incomplete story.