This is fantastic! I like the idea of Gerard and Mikey being partners in crime, so to speak, though I don't actually like the crimes they do- they're just sick!
You really lead me to think that Frank was going to go to 'Carter' and I was so surprised when he didn't, but I want to know who's behind the door! Will they let them stay? Will they turn them in? Who are they?
The section where Emma and Frank think about they're pasts and 'leave' them behind with the railway track is compelling and well-written.
I love it! It's a new twist on the whole 'slave' thing and is very refreshing!
Keep writing, and update soon!
Love Rae xo
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