Lmao i do have to agree with The Resident on all of his comments but i also have to say that this story is/ was coming along excellently i have been reading this since you published it but i never reviewed it before now because i wasnt all that into telling people what i thought but then people reviewed a coulpe of times on my stories on other sites and i realized the importance of reviewing. Uncle Buck has some good points but my personal opinion matches alot of these agreeing with grilling Remus and also there should be a decent rough patch for a while between the them because what he said to Harry and Hermione was really messed up especially since he was supposed to care for harry but then again he could have just been following orders to act like he cared for harry. i hope to see Harry meeting the Grangers in the next chapter and i hope you dont make the ending of Voldemort quick and easy i mean come on you have to admit that those are kinda cheesy fics where they have like one duel and harry whoops voldies ass i mean draw it out and make it "A KNOCK DOWN AND DRUG OUT FIGHT!" and then i think you will have an EXCELLENT story. make sure you keep the "Warlocks" in this story too make them a main part of it like say they've spent so much time around Harry/Mione that they begin to develop magic and such because i dont think The Potters would have happened if it werent for the "Warlocks". that is all for now i hope to see and update preferrably sooner than later though if at all possible...
*Eilenbeb