An outstanding story very clever idea and spin on things. It was great that Ron's was a bit player in events as that is what he is he adds nothing but trouble and anger to anything he is part of. I am glad Hermione got her thinking sorted it is about time her know it all attitude was sorted. I liked what was done with Luna she is an ideal counterpart for Harry.
Very creative ideas a joy to read it would be good if there was another chapter to finish things fully or a follow on. Thanks very much I look forward to your next story.
Author's response
Thank you. It was fun making Hermione unable to keep being Miss Bossy-boots. ;-)