Review for Harry Potter and The Mind

Harry Potter and The Mind

(#) dennisud 2009-12-15

Damn good so far with 'Super" Harry cleaning house and taking old Tom out in a very satisfying way!

The only other critique is the quickness of Luna entering the story compared to the slow methodical yet humiliating walk Hermione had through the story so far!

And the quickness of the updates means to me you have this already done and we'll get updates soon!

dennisud

Author's response

Chapter 27 is the end of this fic, and says "FIN" at the bottom (assuming this web site didn't chop it off).