I know I'm late, but... I was reading other HP fanfics on another site...
"“Ordure ! rends moi mon corps, charogne !”" This one had me laughing: I can easily imagine Fleur saying that (and it is syntactically correct French ;-p)
"“Petite bite, éjaculateur précoce. Je suis sure que Potter en a une plus grosse, bande mou!”" Bwahahahahahahaha!
I hope that you will have more of those little acts of rebellion from Fleur, because I think I'll have some good laughs :-D (And I hope that you will have Fleur thanking Harry for saving her -- supposing you will have her surviving this -- it may be the only chance Harry will have to try the 37 steps ;-D)
"Chiun had never been so lavish with his praise before." Bwahahahaha! Thanks for the good laugh :-D
(and thanks to Horace Nihil for the French sentences: It's good to read some correct French, and not what is coming from those automated translators)
Please, update soon again!
Author's response
- When Horace offered, how could I decline? French from an actual French-type guy has to be better than what I dimly remember from High School French class circa 1970...