Review for Fall of a Hero

Fall of a Hero

(#) JesusKetchum31 2006-01-01

loud Amy-esque whimper So.. sad... ;.; Sad, sad, sad, sad... Pretty well-written too. My only criticisms are ones of mechanics. A lot of your sentences are a little awkward, and misspellings abound. Good job! Poor Sonic... I'm glad I'm not the only one who sees the darkness in Tails though.