(#) Mr7 2010-01-02
Brilliant work!
I've read way too much fanfiction, both in my and my friends' opinions, but stories like this are the reason I can't stop.
A very entertaining read that kept me hooked on it for the day, this story has everything it needs to be great and has accomplished it with ease.
I liked the characters, and found the narration to be easy to follow and thought-provoking.
Keep up the great work, I hope to see other stories from you soon.
Author's response
I probably read too much fanfiction as well, so I know what you mean. Thank you for your review; it's comments like this that makes the work worthwhile.