i thought this was really good =] i loved the way you left it on a question, i'm definitely gonna have to look out for updates on this! i wanna know what happens =D
Author's response
lalwlz thnx :D I wasnt really sure what to put for the end of the chapter so I thot just to put a question. I am doing the second chapter right now. It wouldve bin up earlier but I had to go bk to my moms house