Hey - good chapter! So glad you updated - you're right, noone writes DandJ anymore! It's really sad! Hope you read mine? Its on fanfiction.net (called 'Pick a Pocket').
I liked the suspense you created, and I was quite stressed for Delilah when she was walking around the room, and she realised it was hers! Good idea! So want to read more! Please update quickly!
Author's response
Hey! Good to see someone read my story! I'm glad there's still at least one other D&J fan going =]
Thanks for the positive review! I just got my laptop back from Dell the other day but I lost my files so I'll have to continue the story from scratch, but I should have another chapter up this week!