Loved it! I'm always a fan of the forbidden romance so I loved this plot! You did so well in outlining the sexual tension between D&J! I was so torn for them! Such a great oneshot(-?)! I do think you should coninue =]
Author's response
Trinda: Me too! :-D Aww, thanks - I tried very hard to make their complicated relationship seem just that - complicated. Thanks so much for reviewing!