I can honestly say that I didn't see the whole "spiders thing" coming. But it all makes sense now.
I like this so far. It's really good ^^
Author's response
thank u so much! =D i've gotta admit, when i first started writing it, i wasn't entirely sure what the phobia was going to be haha but then it kind of took on a life of it's own and turned into that =] thank u so much for reading it! >.