I loved this. Such an interesting story thus far, and I bet it'll get better too since you're such an awesome writer =) I can't imagine Patrick hitting anyone since he's so sweet, ah, but alcohol makes you do stupid/out-of-the-ordinary stuff. Going to read the next chap's now
Author's response
Heheh awe thanks. :D
And HUGE thanks for reviewing all the chapters! (:
Christie,xo