Oh, how I love this game. You sure know how to portrait this game into a fantastic story line, one I'm gonna keep watching. Your skill of putting details into the story is remarkable. Feelings and dialogues that you don't see in the game...
I'm new to this place, but kinda of a veteran when it comes to fiction. Better subit a story myself soon.
Kiranna sounds like a cool character and I trust you to honor her skills from the game. I loved playing Taris... being a nice helpful person all over. Make us proud.