Review for The Setting Sun

The Setting Sun

(#) girlinthemoon 2010-02-05

Sorry you've been sick. I'm just starting to get over bronchitis a sinus infection and a double ear infection. So I know how you feel. Get better soon.

Great chapter. Like Sas says, it's so interesting to find our more about the characters. Small things make them seem more real, fuller.

Get lots of rest and take care of yourself!

Author's response

Thanks for the care lady =) And I'm sorry you were so sick but at least you're getting over it. Wednesday you would have believed I was dying. My coworker kept making me sit down cos he was worried I looked like I was about to fall out. I tried calling management and not one of them would come in for me. I never call out, or try to leave in the middle of the work night, and they wouldn't come in. then they had the nerve to try to call me in later that day to do a second shift for someone. I was ready to kick some arse.

Anyway, lol, I like it when the characters don't seem flat or fake to me, it makes it easier to imagine the story better =) Glad you're liking the story lady Rayne =)